Leila's Writing Feedback

Leila's Writing Feedback

Author: Caryn Horrigan
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Hi Leila, I'm about to read your writing and give you some feedback. I want to show you how I edit your paper, so you can do the same thing with your own work, and so that you can help your friends and classmates to edit their writing and make it excellent too! You are doing a great job--keep it up!