Revision Techniques: Thesis and Support

Revision Techniques: Thesis and Support

Author: Kathryn Reilly
This lesson discusses how to revise a paper to improve cohesion.
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This slideshow reviews how to assess the thesis and support sentences to ensure they work together to create a coherent paper.

Source: Kathryn Reilly