+
2 Tutorials that teach Tone
Take your pick:
Tone

Tone

Rating:
Rating
(0)
Description:

This lesson will prepare students to be able to: Identify the tone of a piece of writing. 

(more)
See More
Try a College Course Free

Sophia’s self-paced online courses are a great way to save time and money as you earn credits eligible for transfer to over 2,000 colleges and universities.*

Begin Free Trial
No credit card required

25 Sophia partners guarantee credit transfer.

221 Institutions have accepted or given pre-approval for credit transfer.

* The American Council on Education's College Credit Recommendation Service (ACE Credit®) has evaluated and recommended college credit for 20 of Sophia’s online courses. More than 2,000 colleges and universities consider ACE CREDIT recommendations in determining the applicability to their course and degree programs.

Tutorial
This tutorial covers tone in writing—how a text’s purpose and audience influence its tone and how to assess tone in paragraphs. The specific areas of focus include:
  1. Purpose and Audience
  2. Establishing Tone
    1. Word Choice
    2. Level of Formality
    3. Sentence Structure
  3. Identifying Tone in a Piece of Writing


1. Purpose and Audience

It’s important to start by thinking about the purpose and audience of a text, which are two factors that have huge effects on the way you write.

The purpose of a text is what it’s meant to do, such as convince your readers to take your side in a debate, or inform them about something interesting. And of course, those readers are your audience.

Together, the purpose and audience influence everything about your text, particularly:

  • Word choice
  • Level of formality
  • Sentence structure

It’s these factors that in turn determine what your tone is.


2. Establishing Tone

Tone is a writer’s attitude toward the subject as conveyed through a piece of writing. In other words, the tone of a text is how authors express their opinion toward and attitude about the topic. Tone helps create the feel of the text—everything working together to speak in the author’s voice.

Maybe the author’s voice is negative, positive, or neutral. It could be sarcastic or angry, melancholy or exuberant, nostalgic or hopeful. Just as the inflection in the tone of a person’s voice can move from naive to jaded to sad, so too can the tone of a piece of writing.

You can even describe the tone of writing in the same way that you describe the tone of voice. In this way, you can even try to hear writing as if it were being read aloud, if you want to assess its tone.

Thus, listening to the author’s voice is one great way to assess and identify the tone of a piece. You might read a text aloud to really hear how it sounds and what those sounds make you feel.

But what is doing the work to make you feel? There are a few ways in which tone can be established:

  • Word choice
  • Level of formality
  • Sentence structure

These three factors work in concert with one another, like an orchestra turning out a complex melody.

Tone
A writer's attitude toward the subject as conveyed through a piece of writing


2a. Word Choice

First, tone is determined by the words the author chooses. Does the author use formal or informal language? What level is the vocabulary—highly technical and precise or more general and casual?

Think also about the connotations and denotations of these words. Has this author chosen words with heightened emotional connotations? Or has the author tried to maintain a drier tone, and use words strictly in their denotative sense?


2b. Level of Formality

Look also to the level of formality the author uses. Does the text affect a formal tone or a casual one?

If a piece of writing relies on the personal, uses slang, and takes a relaxed approach to grammar, then that piece is casual.

Conversely, if a text remains neutral in tone, uses more complex vocabulary, and eschews the personal entirely, then it’s formal.


2c. Sentence Structure

Finally, tone is determined by the complexity of the sentence structure in a text. Are the sentences short and choppy, long and complex, or a mixture? All of these factors work together to create an overall tone.

Writing dominated by short sentences and highly emotional words is more casual. Formal writing, on the other hand, tends to feature longer and more complex sentences, as well as vocabulary that includes technical words.


3. Identifying Tone in a Piece of Writing

How do you figure out what tone a piece is affecting? You might start by reading it aloud to yourself, but then you can also ask if what you hear is positive, negative, or neutral.

Once you’ve established the text’s emotional category, you can start narrowing down to what kind of positive, negative, or neutral emotional tone it has created.

Read the following text aloud to yourself, and see if you can identify its tone.

The author sounds angry and disgusted. How do you know where the tone comes from in the language? Look at the first sentence:

The phase “utter lack of accountability” is saying that politicians are not being held responsible for their behavior. That’s a pretty divisive argument, but the tone of the phrase itself indicates the author’s feelings. This author could have said something more neutral, and the meaning would’ve been the same. But with intense words, you can tell that this is angrier. Here are some other words that seem charged with intensity, anger, or even disgust:

In this context, it’s hard to say any of these words in a happy tone. Thus, the author’s reason for using this tone is to make the readers get angry and be spurred to action. All of that language and tone is meant to drive readers to action by making them want to change the situation.

The following piece of writing has a very different tone:

This is lighthearted, and even funny in places. It’s also written in an entirely narrative manner. Given the style, the author’s purpose is to tell an entertaining story. Do you see the ways that the tone reflects this? Look at how the story is framed:

That first sentence tells you that the purpose is hilarity. You can also notice spots like these that indicate a more casual, lighthearted tone:

See the exclamation point and the dash that indicates a kind of interruption or realization? All of that makes this sound more conversational.

Finally, this text has another tone entirely:

This a pretty academic piece. You see an argument about teaching popular texts in college courses, so you know that this is meant to convince the reader of something. But how does it differ from the first example, which was also trying to persuade the reader of something?

Unlike the first example, this piece isn’t appealing to your emotions by using inflammatory words and intensely evocative description. Instead, this uses a more neutral tone and walks through the implications of its claims with a gentler, unemotional affect:

Think about how different this would be if the text instead made the same point this way:

That latter sentence is intense and emotional again. That kind of argumentation would work well on a debate stage or maybe on a talk radio show. But the original tone would work better in an academic setting where you know that the tone is usually meant to eschew bias and be more neutral.

In this tutorial, you learned that once you determine the purpose and audience of your text, you can start to think about establishing tone. Tone is the writer’s attitude toward a particular subject, and there are three main factors that should be considered when establishing tone: word choice, level of formality, and sentence structure. Considering all three of these will help you choose the most effective tone for your particular purpose and audience.

Finally, you practiced identifying tone in a piece of writing. When trying to determine the tone, it’s often helpful to read the piece aloud and look for tonal clues, such as whether the author uses emotional or unemotional language, and how the argument or main point is framed.

Good luck!

Source: This work is adapted from Sophia author Martina Shabram.

TERMS TO KNOW
  • Tone

    A writer's attitude toward the subject as conveyed through a piece of writing.